So surprised, as well as moved, am I for Tom’s love and respect to his mother and Peggy’s good quality —— ‘thoughtful’ and ‘caring’ after hearing the story.
Dating with mother, the creative idea, brings a light flashing through my mind. Peggy is right, dating isn’t a patent for lovers, but also can be a way for a son to express his sincere emotion to his dear mother. And as what Peggy said in the article, life is too short and we need to spend time with the people we love. There is a lifetime pity that parents passed away before children could have taken good care of them in many people’ heart. As a result, it’s high time for us to express our sincerely respect to parents.
The other reason why I admit that Peggy is thoughtful is that she eliminate the concern from many mother’s heart——her son spends more time and care on his wife and less on herself. Nothing is more longed for than children’s comforting by old parents.
Both Tom and his mother must have a wonderful time when they get out for dinner. Talking something interesting, recalling the past thing, listening to son’s work and family, that’s maybe the all happiness for an old mother. On the contrary, seeing smile blossoming on mother’s face is the biggest happy thing for son. I sincerely admire Tom and Peggy’s creative and thoughtful idea !
As to the topic of this article, mother’s love ,in my eyes, it’s the most beautiful words in the world, and all words are too weak to praise it. Parents bring
children up for nothing for themself but a good prospect for children. However, we should be clearly aware that it’s our duty to support our parents to return their selfless love. Talk with them, help them with household chores or bring them a small gift like a bunch of flowers, not only on Mother’s Day or their birthday, but everyday in our life.
自评：条理清晰，理由充分，但词汇和句型在文中略有重复。4.0分
互评：观点明确，条理清晰，有真情实感。4.2分
