高三英语专题写作学案第14讲_新闻报道

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广州卓越教育机构一对一高三专题写作学案第14讲

新闻报道

【诊查】

(一）基础篇：

职业 ________________________________________ 任命 ________________________________________ 赞成 ________________________________________ 相关词汇技术 ________________________________________ 通知 ________________________________________ 获得 ________________________________________ 精确的 ________________________________________ 报道（v.） ________________________________________ 彻底的 ________________________________________ 1 .了解 ________________________________________ 2. 将前往 ________________________________________ 3. 名胜古迹 ________________________________________ 4. 集中 ________________________________________ 5. 靠近 ________________________________________ 6. 释放压力 ________________________________________ 7. 快乐地成长 ________________________________________ 8. 欣赏诗歌 ________________________________________ 相关短语 9. 交流想法 ________________________________________ 10.背诵作品 ________________________________________ 11.在……的邀请下 ________________________________________ 12.被……给予深刻印象 ________________________________________ 13.鼓励某人做某事 ________________________________________ 14.最著名的旅游景 ________________________________________ 15.垃圾分类 ________________________________________ 16.了解当地文化 ________________________________________ 17.在……的邀请下 ________________________________________ 18.节能环保的 ________________________________________ 19.唤起人们的……意识 ________________________________________ 第 1 页共 13 页

1. ________ _________ __________ __________in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students. 在佛山为期一周的逗留中, 这些学生们体验了中国学生的校园生活。 2. The British students ________ _________ __________ the kindness of Chinese 相关句式 students. 英国的学生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。 3. _______ _________ ________ a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March. 在一个英国学校的邀请下, 华文中学的38名学生明年三月将启程去英国进行交流访问。 4. _______ _________ _________ _________ that poetry could help them release pressure. 据说诗歌还有助于缓解压力。 5. _______ ________ ________the famous sports star will also run with the torch. 很可能那位著名的体育明星也要参加火炬接力。 (二）提高篇：

1) 多亏专家及时赶到，他们的难题随即便得到了解决。（in no time）

_____________________________________________________________________________ 2) 它的目的在于对该工作的各个方面提供一个彻底的培训。（aim to do )

_____________________________________________________________________________ 3) 这个记者被派去报道一个受贿的有关新闻。（cover）

_____________________________________________________________________________ 4) 只有这样我们才能构建一个和谐社会。（Only + 状语）

_____________________________________________________________________________ 5) 对于我们来说，每分钟都很有价值。（be + of + n ）

_____________________________________________________________________________ 6) 他也指出导致近视（ short-sightedness）的原因是如此的复杂,到目前为止没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。 (so ... that ... )

_____________________________________________________________________________ 8) 在我看来，这些父母所做的已经对他们的发展造成了坏的影响。 ( make an effect on ） _____________________________________________________________________________ 9) 专家提出的计划得到了的认可。（put forward ）

____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

10) 更这说明了急救知识的能够发挥重要的作用。 ( first aid / make a difference )

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【导学】

技巧点拨

1. 新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topic sentence), 因此这个句子中常包含四大元素 what(事件), when(时间), where(地点)和who(人物), 而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节, 往往包括why(目的或原因)和how(具体过程)等。

2. 注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语, 如It is reported that..., As is reported..., According to the report...等。

3. 新闻通讯报道在于平实客观的语言, 考生不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。典型例题 (2008年佛山一模)

上周, 一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假设你是该校通讯员, 请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一篇英文报道。 [写作内容]

时间地点事件行程佛山影响回访计划例题导写 1：

上周华文中学一批英国学生到访了解中国学生的校园生活、参观佛山的著名景点，体验当地文化洁净的市容友善的学生美味的食品华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国

1. 认真审题。新闻报道也是记叙文的一种, 但是与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。日记类型的文章考生不但把自己的所见所闻描绘出来, 还要注意情感的表达, 而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观的报道, 因此语言方面可以相对平实一点。 2. 词汇整理翻译或完成下列短语。句2：

(1) 感受校园生活：______________________________________________________ 句3：

(2) 参观著名景点：______________________________________________________ (3) 体验当地文化：______________________________________________________ 句4：

(4) 洁净的市容, 友善的学生, 美味的食品：

_______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ 句5：

(5) 回访：______________________________________________________________

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3. 难句翻译请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句子。

句4：洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留下了深刻的印象。

The British students ________________________________ the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. / ______________________________________________ the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. / The clean city, friendly students and delicious food ________________________________ the British students 句5：华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。

____________________ _ , 38 students in Huawen Middle School are invited to visit Britain next March. /

_________________________ a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School______________________ Britain for ______________________________ next March. 4.连句成篇

_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________

例题导写2：

假设为了让青少年更了解诗歌, 上个周末广州市教育局在你校举办了一场诗歌大赛。假设你是学校报社的通讯员, 为这个活动写一篇报道。 [写作内容]

举办目的举办时间举办地点参加人数举办详情参赛者感受校长感受

【Draft】

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让青少年更了解和学会欣赏诗歌 2013年10月 10日，上周日第一中学 200多个来自全市不同学校的高中生参赛者背诵自己的作品，交流经验 1. 通过比赛与诗歌更靠近了 2. 诗歌可以帮助释放压力，帮助我们快乐成长鼓励大家像诗人那样思考，对世界更敏感和真诚

1 2 3 4 5 总结 Conjunctions 连接词 Words & Phrases 好词，词组 Sentence Structure 高级句型结构

连句成篇

【展示】

基础篇

The Chinese government has decided that smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country. This decision, __________ will be carried out from January 1, 2011, ________ _______ （旨在）bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. ___________（数据） show that China has approximately 350,000,000 smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. Around 540 million people _________ ________（影响） by second-hand smoke, _________ （引发） 100,000 deaths per year. 提高篇：

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Setence 1: 看起来一些自然灾害应归咎于全球变暖。

_______________________________________________________________________________ Setence 2 : 在旅游业发展的同时，．我们也应该尽快保护我们的文化遗产和纪念碑。

_______________________________________________________________________________

Setence 3: 我们不能忽视这样一个事实：那就是报纸需对所服务的社区负责。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Setence 4: 简而言之，我们每个人都应意识到环保的重要性并自觉行动起来。

_______________________________________________________________________________ Setence 5: 只有这样，我们才能建立一个文明、和谐的旅游环境和享受旅游景点之美。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Setence 6: 一旦有一天我们用完了自然资源，后果无法想象。

_______________________________________________________________________________ Setence 7: 它更这说明了急救知识的能够发挥重要的作用。 _______________________________________________________________________________ Setence 8 : 更糟糕的是，许多人并未意识到且仍在每天浪费大量用水。

_______________________________________________________________________________ [中级] 基础写作

请写一篇短文, 报道你校学生李华拾金不昧的事迹.具体情况如下:

时间地点上周六人民广场 1, 收获一钱包, 内有身份证和3000元经过 2, 等3小时未见失主, 苦寻失主未果 3, 把钱包交到派出所几天后

失主到校感谢, 表扬并酬谢300元; 李华拒绝并表示应该做的 _ __________________________________________________________________________

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新闻通讯亦为记叙文，时态要用过去时，注意句子结构；主句，从句结构要清晰，语言要客观平时，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。对于报道的写作顺序建议如下： ( 概行经意果）

概行经意果 1（目的)+时间+地点+事件（概）非性定从 / 简单句 2行程安排 / 活动1 3 事情经过 / 活动2 4活动影响 / 意义 5活动结果

NO.1【基础写作】

请给校报写一则关于广州市推行垃圾分类的报道。写作内容:

内容实施时间实施范围垃圾分类优点

推行垃圾分类 2013年1月1日起广州市可回收物, 餐厨垃圾, 有害垃圾和其他垃圾废物利用, 节能环保 1. 唤起垃圾分类的意识 2. 增设垃圾分类回收的设施(facility) 3. 改目前的垃圾储运形式 4. 大力开发垃圾回收利用的科学研究概行经意果 As is reported ,.... / sb/ 组织did sth + time + s.place 状，主句 + 介词短语 / 分词做状语（表伴随） Not only ...but also ... / 句子 + but / and + 句子./并列谓语 It is said / suggested that ... 被动语态倡议 _____________________________________________________________________ _ __________________________________________________________________________

假设你是《英文早报》的兼职小记者, 伦敦组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的路线, 你将为这一

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事件进行报道, 以下是报道的内容。［写作内容］基本情况公布时间伦敦奥组委员会公布伦敦奥运火炬传递路线 11月7日 1. 途经多个著名景点 2. 历经1000多个村庄，城镇和城市 3. 6200多万英国人中的95%的人口都可以目具体详情睹 4. 历时70天 5. 在温德米尔湖火炬在汽船(steamboat)上传播, 在泰晤士(the Thames)河在划艇 (rowboat)上传播, 在某处还会在马上传播火炬传递者 8000名, 大多数是普通的公众, 但也可能有著名球星,如:贝克汉姆参考词汇：伦敦奥组委员 the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games 火炬传递 Torch Relay 温德米尔 Lake Windermere

【诊查】

基础篇：

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职业 profession 任命 appoint 相关词汇赞成 approve / agree with 技术 technology 通知 inform 获得 acquire / obtain 精确的 accurate 报道（v.） cover / be reported 彻底的 thorough 1 .了解 learn about 2. 将前往 be to set for 3. 名胜古迹 places of interest 4. 集中 gather together 5. 靠近 get close to 6. 释放压力 release pressure 7. 快乐地成长 grow up happily 相关短语 8. 欣赏诗歌 appreciate poetry 9. 交流想法 exchange thoughts 10.背诵作品 recite one’s works 11.在……的邀请下 at the invitation of 12.被……给予深刻印象 be impressed by 13.鼓励某人做某事 encourage sb. to do sth. 14.最著名的旅游景 the best-known tourist spot 15.垃圾分类 waste sorting 16.了解当地文化 learn about the local culture 17.在……的邀请下 at the invitation of 18.节能环保的 energy-saving and environment-friendly 19.唤起人们的……意识 arouse people's awareness of 第 9 页共 13 页

1. During their one-week stay in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students. 在佛山为期一周的逗留中, 这些学生们体验了中国学生的校园生活。 2. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students. 相关句式英国的学生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。 3. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March. 在一个英国学校的邀请下, 华文中学的38名学生明年三月将启程去英国进行交流访问。 4. It was also said that poetry could help them release pressure. 据说诗歌还有助于缓解压力。 5. It’s likely that that famous sports star will also run with the torch. 很可能那位著名的体育明星也要参加火炬接力。提高篇：

1) Thanks to the quick arrival of the expert, their problem was solved in no time. 2) It aims to provide a thorough (彻底地) training in all aspects of the work. 3) The journalist was sent to cover the news about an official who took bribes. 4) Only in this way can we build a harmonious society. 5) Each minute is of great/ much value for us.

6) He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no drugs can cure short-sightedness so far

7) It is suggested that the problem has business with /is related to how we hold the pen while writing.

8) What these parents have done has made bad effect on their children. 9) The project put forward by experts has been accepted by the government. 10) It shows that knowledge of first aid can make a big difference. 【导学】例题导写 2

（1）experience the campus life of Chinese students

（2）visit / pay a visit to some places of interest / tourist attractions （3）learn / know about the local culture

( 4 ) the clean city , friendly students and delicious food / the cleanness of the city , kindness of the students and niceness of food ( 5 ) an exchange visit

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3 句4

were deeply impressed by . / What expressed the British students deeply was ， left a deep impression on . 句5：

In return, / At the invitation of ，are to set for , an exchange visit . 连句成篇

Huawen Middle School in Foshan City received a group of students from Britain last week. During their one-week stay in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students.

They also visited some places of interest in Foshan and learned about the local culture. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students, cleanness of the city and niceness of food. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March. 例题导写2：【Draft】

Conjunctions 连接词 / from,and through and that is Words & Phrases 好词，词组 help sb do sth, appreciate gather together, recite competitor , competition release pressure, grow up encourage sb to do ,sensitive , sincere 多用被动语态，语言尽量客观平实！ Sentence Structure 高级句型结构被动语态分词做状语宾从 it为形式主语+主从简单句 1 2 3 4 5 总结

连句成篇

In order to help teenagers learn moreand appreciate poetry, a poetry contest was held in the

No. 1 High School last Sunday, December 11th, 2011. 200 senior students from different high schools all over the city gathered together, reciting their works and exchanging thoughts. Many competitors said that they were getting close to poems through this competition. It was also said that poetry could help them release pressure and grow up happily. The headmaster encouraged us to think like a poet, that is, be sensitive and sincere towards the world.

【展示】

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基础篇 which , aims to , Statistics , are affected ，causing 提高篇：

Setence 1: It seems that global warming could be to blame for the natural disasters

Setence 2 : With the boom of tourism，it is also high time that we took quick action to protect our cultural relics and monuments．

Setence 3: We must not lose sight of the fact that each newspaper needs to be responsible to the community of that it serves.

Setence 4: In brief, every one of us should realize the significance of environmental protection and act immediately.

Setence 5: Only in this way can we build a civilized and harmonious tourism environment and enjoy the beauty of our tourist sites．

Setence 6: Once we run out of natural resources, the consequence will be unimaginable. Setence 7: It shows that knowledge of first aid can make a big difference .

Setence 8 : What’s worse, many people don’t realize it and still waste a lot of water every day. 中级基础写作

Saturda Last y, Li Hua found a wallet in People’s Square, in which there were an ID card and 3000 yuan. Not only did he wait for three hours but also he tried to look for the owner everywhere. However, the owner did not turn up so he had to hand it in to the police. Several days later, the owner came to our school to express his gratitude to Li Hua and gave him 300 yuan as a reward. Li Hua said it was what he should do and did not accept it.

亮点点击：定语从句in which there were an ID card and 3000 yuan, 用得非常出色．用express his gratitude to sb. 表达＂向某人表示感谢＂，很恰当。高级

NO.1【基础写作】

Guangzhou will begin waste sorting from January 1st，2013 throughout the city. According to the rules，rubbish can be classified into four groups：recyclable waste，kitchen waste，harmful waste and other waste. Not only can waste sorting make good use of the waste material, but also it is energy-saving and environmental-friendly. It is suggested that the government should arouse people’s awareness of waste sorting and provide more waste sorting facilities. Improving the present waste storing and transportation means and doing more research on this aspect are also preferred.

亮点点击：not only… but also (连接两个句子时，前面一句用倒装句)句式的使用，It is suggested that … (人们建议)句式的使用，以及arouse people’s awareness of (唤起人们的．．．认识)表达等，都是本文的亮点。 NO.2【基础写作】

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As is reported, the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games released the route of the London 2010 Olympic Torch Relay on November 7. The Olympic Torch will visit some of Britain’s best-known tourist spots, covering 1, 000 villages, towns and cities across the country and reaching more than 95% of Britain’s 62 million population.

The 70-day torch relay will be carried in a steamboat across Lake Windermere, on a rowboat on the Thames, and on horseback elsewhere. According to the Committee, most of the 8, 000 torchbearers will be ordinary members of the public . But it’s likely that famous sports stars like David Beckham will also run with the torch.

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